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Hi all! 

A close friend of mine has been working hard trying to kick-start a new career in sports media and has been writing a few City related articles on his website. I thought I would pop the link on here and ask your opinions? Personally for somebody who has started this from scratch with no previous writing experience, I think he's doing a great job so far! 

Here's his latest post.

https://www.centre-circle.com/blog/blog-bristol-city-looking-ahead

He's also running Facebook and Twitter pages which are not just exclusive to City but football in general:

Twitter - @CentCircSport

Facebook- https://www.facebook.com/CentreCircleSports/

Honest opinions are welcome as he would be happy to know where he's going wrong. 

Thank you! 

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1 hour ago, Muckingfuddled said:

Hi all! 

A close friend of mine has been working hard trying to kick-start a new career in sports media and has been writing a few City related articles on his website. I thought I would pop the link on here and ask your opinions? Personally for somebody who has started this from scratch with no previous writing experience, I think he's doing a great job so far! 

Here's his latest post.

https://www.centre-circle.com/blog/blog-bristol-city-looking-ahead

He's also running Facebook and Twitter pages which are not just exclusive to City but football in general:

Twitter - @CentCircSport

Facebook- https://www.facebook.com/CentreCircleSports/

Honest opinions are welcome as he would be happy to know where he's going wrong. 

Thank you! 

I've got a theory....your close friend is you?!

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It's a good read but if you want constructive criticism the English style is rather stop start; paragraphs don't naturally flow into the next one and there is overmuch use of commas when they should either not be there at all or should be replaced by a semicolon.

It's a good start but I would suggest his reading aloud what he has written, prior to publishing, in order to see if it flows as a piece with sections naturally following one after the last as in an after dinner speech.

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There are some very good contributers on this forum and I don't see what we don't croudsource a fan website with opinion pieces, match reports (I think we know who would do that) and podcasts. I'd happily do some editing. 

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Really well written.... and pretty much how I see the club! I’d bet that Max starts in August... why not? Really great that Mo E has been signed now (?) especially with Fam’s ban - and what a crock of s*£t that seems to have been.. Taylor Moore and Jens - unlikely heroes of the new season?

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