FrozenRobin Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 Anyone got any questions based on City's current state that they could share with me, for a blog post. To be put on a poll. EG, Does KOREY SMITH START WHEN FIT? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red_Nine Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 No he doesnt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenRobin Posted September 29, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 20 minutes ago, Red_Nine said: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meh Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 3 minutes ago, FrozenRobin said: gender assumption Well he does play in a men’s professional league to be fair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenRobin Posted September 29, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 2 minutes ago, Meh said: Well he does play in a men’s professional league to be fair. shit a brick, I'm really sorry. Thought he was referring to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meh Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 Will Korey Smith ever be fit enough to warrant a new contract? Will Marley Watkins ever be given a chance to prove himself by our fans? Will Josh Brownhill ever let Kasey Palmer take a free kick in the opposition half? Will Nagy only ever play Internationals the rest of the season? Will COD ever smile? Will Baker ever play 90 minutes without needing to hobble even slightly during the game? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie BCFC Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 Is Famara underappreciated by our fans? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenRobin Posted September 29, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 more info here: https://robinview.home.blog/2019/09/29/more-deepdale-misery-and-questions-wanted/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davefevs Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 A few typos, and could do with a proof read before publishing. think you need to expand your content....unless you are restricted by word count? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenRobin Posted September 29, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 6 minutes ago, Davefevs said: A few typos, and could do with a proof read before publishing. I am a 13 year old not a journalist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenRobin Posted September 29, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 10 minutes ago, Davefevs said: think you need to expand your content....unless you are restricted by word count? No I'm not restricted on my amount of writing. Wasn't at the game so couldn't really describe it in detail. 5 minutes ago, FrozenRobin said: I am a 13 year old Truth, honestly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davefevs Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 5 minutes ago, FrozenRobin said: I am a 13 year old not a journalist. Ha ha, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenRobin Posted September 29, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 1 minute ago, Davefevs said: Ha ha, sorry. no worries, I doubt many people would beleive me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davefevs Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 4 minutes ago, FrozenRobin said: no worries, I doubt many people would beleive me I dunno Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cidered abroad Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 7 minutes ago, FrozenRobin said: no worries, I doubt many people would beleive me You'll do OK in life as you already possess a sense of humour, especially when someone takes the mickey out of you. Here is my question. Why do Bristol City the biggest club in the sixth or seventh largest city in England (not including London), find it almost impossible to become a member of the top tier in English football? Four years only since 1911. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bar BS3 Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 1 hour ago, FrozenRobin said: I am a 13 year old not a journalist. Then you should thrive from constructive criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1960maaan Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 5 hours ago, FrozenRobin said: shit a brick, I'm really sorry. Thought he was referring to me. In fairness people would possibly assume when it says "king" under your user name 1 hour ago, FrozenRobin said: I am a 13 year old not a journalist. 1 hour ago, FrozenRobin said: no worries, I doubt many people would beleive me I could well believe others on here were 13 or under, so why not 8 minutes ago, Bar BS3 said: Then you should thrive from constructive criticism. Constructive criticism ? It'll never catch on on here, probably stick with the standard criticism . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mozo Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 1 hour ago, FrozenRobin said: I am a 13 year old not a journalist. It was good feedback if you want to get really good at this (maybe a career). That's true if you're 13 or 63. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fordy62 Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 2 hours ago, FrozenRobin said: I am a 13 year old not a journalist. Hahaha. Have that @Davefevs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davefevs Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 10 minutes ago, mozo said: It was good feedback if you want to get really good at this (maybe a career). That's true if you're 13 or 63. That’s why I gave it. A lot of people doing these blogs are aspiring journos, social media writers or trying to get content into a portfolio to show off at a future point or job opportunity. @FrozenRobin if that is something you want to pursue in future, keep at, keep asking for feedback. If you’re on Twitter, hook up with someone like Gregor McGregor and seek advice. Some on here may laugh at that suggestion, but I get on well with him. As Mozo mentioned, 13 or 63, shouldn’t make a difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davefevs Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 2 minutes ago, Fordy62 said: Hahaha. Have that @Davefevs! and I’m 49 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bristol Oil Services Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 2 hours ago, FrozenRobin said: no worries, I doubt many people would beleive me "i" before "e" kid, that's my phil-os-o-phee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BS4 on Tour... Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 11 minutes ago, Moments of Pleasure said: "i" before "e" kid, that's my phil-os-o-phee That was a myth drummed into us at school MOP ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mozo Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 3 hours ago, FrozenRobin said: No I'm not restricted on my amount of writing. Wasn't at the game so couldn't really describe it in detail. Truth, honestly I've done plenty of sports writing (not that you'd know it from my posts!) If you ever need any feedback, I'm more than happy to help. Wish someone had helped me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bristol Oil Services Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 58 minutes ago, BS4 on Tour... said: That was a myth drummed into us at school MOP ... I Always Beleived but now I don't know..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedEyez Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 4 hours ago, FrozenRobin said: no worries, I doubt many people would beleive me “I” before “e” except after “c” Do they not teach you that at school anymore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grey Fox Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 10 hours ago, FrozenRobin said: Anyone got any questions based on City's current state that they could share with me, for a blog post. To be put on a poll. EG, Does KOREY SMITH START WHEN FIT? Should "shit referee, shit refereee" be our new club song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
just like watching brazil Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 Still it’s better than the evil post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exAtyeoMax Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 8 minutes ago, RedEyez said: “I” before “e” except after “c” Do they not teach you that at school anymore? …when the sound is 'ee' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meh Posted September 29, 2019 Report Share Posted September 29, 2019 37 minutes ago, RedEyez said: “I” before “e” except after “c” Do they not teach you that at school anymore? Not always true. A hotel concierge told me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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